Sunday, June 29, 2025

Not Even Not Zen 406: The Mood War, Scenes 1-8 Together

 

Here's a new, short novel: The Mood War. 

That is, here below are links to  the ten percent of the material that Amazon allows as a preview. Included on the pages is a link to the novel.

 

Mood War is copyright 2024, 2025 by Eric Gallagher. 

Secret Hippie is a trademark, 2025 by Eric Gallagher.

Cover art copyright 2025 by Acacia Gallagher.

 

 

 

The Mood War 

Amazon Kindle Direct is a good choice for new authors. However, they only allow their authors to release a tenth of the material, maximum, through other venues in order to meet their classification standard for a new book.


 

Sunday, June 22, 2025

Not Even Not Zen 405: The Mood War, Scene 8

 

copyright 2025 Acacia Gallagher
[VIII] Incident Report (Partial) Defendant, Mood Battle

Cell 3C, ICC Detention Center, the Hague
Scheveningen, the Netherlands

My memories after I got shot are foggy. I saw lights. Blurred shapes. My guts started churning. My legs wobbled. I got dizzy. My unit leader pulled me to my feet. He dragged me by the arm. He kept us dodging in different directions. That made my dizziness worse. I thought I was going to throw up inside my suit.

Man, that’s the one thing they tell you over and over when they issue you a suit. Don’t throw up in it.

When we held still for a minute behind a shrub ... oh, wait, I should mention there was no cover. Every other shrub was taken. So you know the monks above were firing at the shrubs. Scouts who were lying in ditches had it better. Anyway, after we held still long enough for my suit to administer medicine and my head to clear, I gawked at the scene upslope.

The nuns and monks were all gone except for one. They’d run up from the UAZs to their gate, I guess. The only one remaining, right in the middle of the open gate, was lying face down. He had a blood stain in the middle of his back. One of our scouts must have shot him.

I’d never seen a person dying before. I must have stared for a second because a bullet hit my armor. My suit stiffened. Then it encouraged me to lie down. So I did. I could feel my armor sections relaxing. When I removed my glove, there was no resistance. Next, I reactivated my rifle with my thumbprint. Within a second, the rifle communicated with my armor. It beeped. It wanted me to put my glove back on. After I did, the suit made a complete circuit check. It switched me into combat mode. My vision cleared. My eyes naturally focused on an overlay of target tracking that appeared.

When I glanced up the hill, my systems showed me that two of the temple tower windows had become red-outline targets. The UAZs out front had gotten overlays of yellow outlines. They were an option to kill. My suit was fine with me taking out the vehicles.

What stopped me was that everyone else seemed to be sane. I mean, a handful of scouts near the front were shooting a lot, yeah, but they were aiming at the snipers in the tower windows. They weren’t trying for wholesale destruction. None of the army vets were taking potshots at the UAZs. No one aimed at anything inside the compound except for the snipers.

“Hit!” someone yelled.

I couldn’t believe it, but it was true. Petrov, who had been with the leaders, had propped his rifle on the hood of the right-most UAZ. He’d fired off three shots, no more. With bullet number three, he’d managed to tag one of the snipers who was under cover, probably armored, twenty meters in the air. This was at the distance of one and a half football fields. The sniper would have been a dot if he were even in view and not hiding. I literally could not see the hit. A smart bullet from a smart rifle had to tell me about it.

Petrov turned back to the rest of us and grinned. That was when someone on the other side pulled out their hand-held missile launcher. There was a bright light on top of the wall above the temple gate.

“Holy shit!”

 

Sunday, June 15, 2025

Not Even Not Zen 404: The Mood War, Scene 7

copyright 2025 Acacia Gallagher
[VII] Details from Interview 8 in Cell 3C

ICC Detention Center, the Hague
Scheveningen, the Netherlands


HR-T1: According to multiple accounts, you were the first person shot. Why have you not mentioned this?

Cruzak: It’s embarrassing.

HR-T1: No.

Cruzak: Fucking yes, it was. We were about a hundred meters from the re-occupied temple. A contingent of monks and nuns came out to tell us to go the fuck away. They set up a barrier.

HR-T1: Nuns came to the talks?

Cruzak: Two of them. We found out there were more, later. Anyway, their group had parked a pair of armored UAZs across the dirt road that was going to become the railway. Kaspar tried to walk between the vehicles but they pointed a half-dozen of elderly, Russian rifles at him and told him to back off. So he introduced himself as head of scouting for the ITB railroad and told them they were trespassing.

HR-T1: How did the clergy react?

Cruzak: I didn’t listen closely. They talked for half an hour, probably more. It got boring. Kaspar kept a phone line open to the Shaymak chief for assistance Both of them looped in some sort of ITB lawyer. She stayed on the call, too, dispensing her advice and insisting that Kaspar say exactly the words to the trespassers that she wanted him to say.

HR-T1: So it was peaceful.

Cruzak: Yeah. I asked if I could plant some of the grass seeds I had in the suit.

HR-T1: Were you given permission?

Cruzak: I sort of started doing it and then asked, but yeah.

HR-T1: Were you the only one doing construction scout work?

Cruzak: Maybe. I was in the middle. A lot of the others behind me sat down. Up front near the UAZs, the unit chiefs and Kaspar kept everyone standing at attention.

HR-T1: Were you the only one?

Cruzak: Yeah, I think so.

HR-T1: So you did your normal work as the talks continued.

Cruzak: When the order came to lower our face masks closed, I filed an objection. Once you snap that visor shut, it puts the suit into a different mode. The AI parts think you’re ready for a fight, so the whole thing jerks you around more. It’s a pain in the ass.

HR-T1: What were your exact words?

Cruzak: I said, “Fuck, no. Let them see our faces.” The scouting chief didn’t have time to repeat the order. I knew that. He had to keep going with his negotiations. So maybe two thirds of the scouts lowered their masks. But I didn’t.

“Lower mask, Cruzak,” my unit leader ordered me. He texted it to me over the comm, too. But since I didn’t have the helmet sealed, the comm display was minimized. It didn’t really bother me.

“Come on, Zielinski.” I felt like I could talk him into making an exception. “They don’t care about us back here.”
“Close face masks. That is the order.”

“It makes us look military. It’s less friendly.” Around me, though, the other stragglers were clamping shut. I could see it.

“Lower mask.”

“It is not friendly.”

“Have you not been listening, Cruzak? They are not so happy.”

“Well, okay, but I protest. This is bullshit.” I rose from my crouch, let my grass seed dispenser slip back into my suit sleeve, and paced. I still hadn’t closed up. The view from inside the helmet screen is better than real life in some ways. It doesn’t have as much glare. You can telescope your view by thinking, too. But the colors are off. They’re muted. Contrast is higher. It’s all a bit different, and I wasn’t used to it. I wanted to get a good, real-life look at the mountain.

“Cruzak.”

“This is totally unnecessary.” I pushed my visor down. I heard the sealing mechanism make its vacuum seal. At the same time, my filter system went green. And that’s when I got shot in the head.

HR-T1: (Chuckles.)

Cruzak: See? Fucking liar. I got hit right on the front left of my face. It happened while I was walking, and my helmet did some sort of compensation thing, so I went down hard. A couple of the scouts laughed. The Nigerian woman, Zala, pointed at me and howled.

HR-T1: You were fine.

Cruzak: I didn’t feel fine. I felt like I’d been shot. Anyway, from the Shaymak chief’s point of view, it established a few things. They had more weapons than we had seen. They were willing to kill us. Maybe they could. Someone on their side had downed our drone. They had at least one sniper. However many they had, their snipers could hit us from a tenth of a kilometer. The caliber of their weapons was kind of crappy, at least to judge by my surviving. It looked like they would need multiple shots.

HR-T1: This was good for you.

Cruzak: Yeah. I’m alive. But they struck fear in me, man, and in the rest of us. All of a sudden, we were in a fight.
HR-T1: But you were an army. You had army suits.

Cruzak: No, ma’am. I told you. We had no ideas about combat. We went to put an end to any idea of a fight. They had come with the opposite approach. They set us up for their main plan. That’s when they dropped their fear bombs. They expected us to run.

HR-T1: Stop calling it a fear bomb.

Cruzak: Fear bomb.

HR-T1: It was a chemical weapon.

Cruzak: Fear bomb.

HR-T1: A gas.

Cruzak: Fear bomb.

HR-T1: Please stop.

Cruzak: Fear bomb.

HR-T1: You are being childish.

Cruzak: Fear bomb. It’s a fear bomb.

HR-T1: Fine. Please move on.

Cruzak: Then they dropped the fear bomb.

HR-T1: (Sighs.)

Cruzak: Up until then, no one had panicked.

 

 

Sunday, June 8, 2025

Not Even Not Zen 403: The Mood War, Scene 6

copyright 2025 Acacia Gallagher
[VI] Incident Report (Partial) Defendant, Mood Battle

Cell 3C, ICC Detention Center, the Hague
Scheveningen, the Netherlands


As Zielinski brought us back to the main camp, I could see Kaspar with his foot on a big rock. He motioned for everyone to stay back. We could hear him arguing with our Shaymak chief, Demytro Melnik, about the temple ahead.

Melnik was the boss who had taken my tools. He was working two kilometers behind us. Turned out he’d ordered drone surveillance of the mountain peak. He didn’t trust the scouts. Plus, he was furious about the ballast getting laid down behind us. That’s why he was in his position. His bulldozers had prepped the mountain subgrade perfectly. But the team behind the bulldozers had used the wrong crushed rock for ballast between the mountain and the steel tracks. He’d ordered coarse granite, no smaller than quarter-inch pieces. What the team had laid down was a cheap-ass pea gravel made out of sandstone. That wouldn’t do.

He couldn’t blame the scouts for that. But he could blame us for the temple.

“You are responsible for the drone!” he shouted loud enough for Kaspar to distance himself for a moment, with the phone at arm’s length.

“Bullshit. This is not good,” Kaspar said into his handset. “They shot down the drone. That is not our responsibility. It was a peaceful drone, no defenses, and we are only scouts.”

The chief’s voice softened a bit. Those of us around Kaspar could only hear one end of the conversation.

“Yes, that is hostile, boss. Of course. You have the pictures from the robot camera. We can see the temple dome. Yes, it is fixed. Agree. Agree. That is a hard job. Fixed anyway. It is fixed.”

They traded some phrases in Russian. Or maybe it was Ukranian.

“Look, there are monks in the stupa, boss. You have seen them walking in the pictures. They have at least six vehicles.”

“No, no. They are all Russian armored, three UAZ models, two Burlak, one KrAZ 214.”

At this point, Kaspar began raising his left hand. He paced back and forth in front of his rock as he talked.

“How would I know? They have Russian armor pieces, all old. That is what I know. If you want more, send me another drone. A better one.”

He had a funny habit, not of smacking himself on the forehead but of slapping on top of his head when he got impatient. He did it now and left the hand in place for a while.

“No, I will not fire weapons from it. Holy cows. Do not be silly. Unless that is your order. Is that your order, boss?”

Then the phone got loud enough to hear his supervisor’s voice. We couldn’t make out the words. At least, I couldn’t. Come to think of it, this part might have been said in Ukranian. Kaspar paced for a while. He propped his right foot on the rock.

When he hung up the phone, he stuck it in a big equipment pouch he kept strapped onto his armor. He nodded to Sokolov, Mendez, and Negasi.

“Hokay, we are off to talk with the men at the temple. No more pussying around.”

“Is that an order from the Shaymak boss, Melnik?” asked Mendez.

“Da.”

“Shit.”

“Why are we going to talk?” asked Gillian, the American.

“Because we are ordered.”

“No, I understand, but what are we going to say to the folks up there?”

It made Kaspar dig his hands in his back pockets for a minute. Not for the first time, I noticed that the unit leaders generally had better suit coverings with places to hold more weapons and tools. Kaspar had assigned himself the improved gear five days before. He’d been thinking about this. He didn’t know how to answer Gillian’s question, though.

“No more shooting down drones by them. That was bad.” He spoke slowly. Kaspar seemed to be reminding himself of what he had just been told. “They are being where they should not be. Those monks, if that’s what they are. No more. No more getting in the way of this construction.”

“But our tracks go right through the middle of their compound. Temple. Stupa. Whatever.”

The American swept her arm upslope. A few of the others turned to see the tiny dot of the temple dome. The rest of us didn’t want to look. We had been worrying about it for most of the day.

“Because we are ordered,” Kaspar repeated.

There was a long moment of the men and women standing around. Everyone sort of digested the mission summary. It was a little like my last girlfriend breaking up with me over the phone. No one wanted to catch my eye or share the moment. As the awkwardness faded, one of the Ethiopian women pointed at me, then at Kaspar. It made me wonder what I’d done.

“In peace?” Gillian asked in a quiet voice.

“Da.” Kaspar nodded. “Yes, listen to me carefully. All weapon safeties are on?”

“Yes,” said Negasi.

“Da.”

“Agree.”

“Right. Now, everyone who did not fire practice rounds, there is a lock on the weapon safety. Activate it. That is to prevent accidents.”

“Regular safety also prevents accidents, Kaspar.” Sokolov gave him a reproachful scowl. “Unlocking takes a few seconds with no glove.”

“Anyone who did not practice, I want them to have to take the seconds.”

“Yes, boss.” Negasi stood to attention, an untroubled expression on his face. All of the Ethiopians had practiced with their rifles. The order didn’t affect them.

“Si. Yes.” The skin on Mendez flushed red. He muttered an order to the woman next to him. She triggered her safety lock.

“Da,” said Petrov.

Sokolov kept his scowl but he nodded. He exchanged a glance with Mendez. I don’t know what that was about. He tried to catch Szymon Zielinski’s eye, too, but my unit leader was busy punching text into his comm. Maybe the other unit heads thought he was giving us orders. Nothing ever came through the comm but I noticed a couple of my line partners locking down. I hadn’t practiced with my weapon, so I locked down too.

Then for an hour we hiked up a narrow trail left by the original engineering team. It was mostly flat, not graded to the sides, and it followed the natural slope of the mountain. There were big earth mover ruts that would need to be flattened but the nearest bulldozer that would have shaped the earth for us had moved back. It was about a kilometer downslope. At least there had been no rain. That meant the trail was okay, not eroding under us as fast as we could walk. The Shaymak range didn’t get many squalls but, when they came, they made gullies out of our flat roads. It didn’t take much to erode the soil.

Run-off is a problem all around the Shaymak plateau. The peaks are dry. There aren’t many trees high up and they’re usually stunted.

That day, we could see down into the valleys, where it had flooded just before the engineers passed through. The greening in the lower half of the peaks happened surprisingly fast. It’s a natural thing. Also, the artificial irrigation installed to support the railway had kicked in. The lands we built on had been made as fertile as any other converted desert in the world. That’s not a lot, because the plants are still cold desert plants. But it’s something. The water condensers and pumps allow grasses and shrubs to hold down the soil.

In retrospect, it was the irrigation that drew the additional settlers to the area. It wasn’t just nice to have the railroad nearby for its cargo transportation. The locals really needed the extra water. They started new villages along the side of the mountain and farmed as close to the rails as they could. The additional water was, maybe, why the monks at the peak thought they could revive their old temple gardens and support themselves.

Or maybe it was all crazy religion stuff from beginning to end. I don’t know.

“Everyone to the left,” Kaspar ordered when the lines of hikers drifted too far apart.

We had two moments of weirdness on the way to the temple. One was when Kaspar ordered us to line up. We achieved something close to a row. Our suits decided that’s what we wanted and they jerked us into perfect position, a straight line. It was awful. Everyone cursed. A few Russians yelled at Kaspar but I don’t know what they said.

The second crazy thing was a practical joke. Gillian, the American, was hiking up front next to Kaspar because she was part of his unit. One of the Ethiopians, Zala, raised her rifle and took a shot at the lump of ammo on Gillian’s back.

Zala’s smart rifle beeped at her. From where I marched behind, I could see her weapon flash green as it locked down. The AI in it had figured this for a bad shot or a joke.

Nagasi, about a yard in front of Zala, stopped when he heard the beep.He lunged, ripped the gun from Zala’s hands, and threw it on the ground. She stepped back. Me and Zielinski gave them lots of room. It’s not like we were soldiers or anything, but a couple of the scouts had been in their national armies before this gig. Nagasi had been a corporal.

I think, as he stood in silence, that he was realizing Zala wasn’t military. She didn’t have the sense of discipline he expected from her. This whole event, despite the look of it, wasn’t an army maneuver. We were a construction gang. He couldn’t shoot her or send her to the stockade or anything like that. He wanted to, though.

Anyhow, I don’t think Gillian or Kaspar ever knew.



Next, The Mood War, Scene 7

Sunday, June 1, 2025

Not Even Not Zen 402: The Mood War, Scene 5

copyright 2025 Acacia Gallagher
MOOD WAR: DAY ONE

 

[V] Details from Interview 37 in Cell 3C

ICC Detention Center, the Hague
Scheveningen, the Netherlands

HR-Spec-9: There is a blank in your transcript. It is not an important time, maybe. Just friends horsing around.

Cruzak: (sounds of shuffling)

HR-Spec-9: Did your Polish team conspire to start a fight with the monastery?

Cruzak: No. (Snort of laughter.) Anyway, that’s not how the problem started. It wasn’t with us.

HR-Spec-9: Then why give nothing to the records? Why no account?

Cruzak: Dunno.

(Twenty seconds of movement, all quiet.)

HR-Spec-9: I have to ask, Herr Cruzak. This is where you got angry before.

Cruzak: They’re all dead.

HR-Spec-9: Excuse please?

Cruzak: They were my friends. They’re all dead.

(Twelve seconds of silence. Three seconds of paper moving.)

HR-Spec-9: I think I see. For now, let us move to different gaps in the transcript.
 

 


Next, The Mood War, Scene 6